Gabby driessnack
This week, we mostly focused on writing our group essays. We also shared our essay with another group that read different summer reading books. We got to read each other's essays and give our ideas on what they excelled at and what they could do to make their essay better. As for my group's essay, we are pretty much done, except we will probably make revisions based off of the comments from the other group. When writing our essay, we each typed a body paragraph. Then, we each added a sentence or two to the introduction and conclusion, along with working together to make transitions between the paragraphs. We all worked together to make sure it flowed nicely and we made solid connections to the book. Along with our essays, we have also been doing creative writings and independent reading. I am still reading, The God of Small Things. The book is a little bit hard to keep up with, because all of the names are Indian, so I have trouble remembering who all the characters are. The book also jumps around quite a bit, so it is hard to know what is going on. In my creative writings, I usually just tell a story from my life. It is nice just having that time to just write whatever you want, and not have to think about being graded. xoxo, Gabby
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Andy Schoenborn
9/23/2016 11:37:57 am
Hi Gabby,
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Gabby DriessnackSenior at MPHS. Archives
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